Not only do I like descriptions of wetting more than messing, but it seems to me that logically she would try peeing 1st, since it's less messy and "wrong. Dotty then asked for the mop, and before I could figure out what was happening, the mop handle was entering my ass. I felt two mouths on my penis, hands on my balls, and fingers going into my anus. It was her foot, firmly poised with her heel right on my balls. Dotty got up, told me to stay put, and went to the kitchen.
All in all, a cute and fun little story. Now recreated as a stand alone tale, with retconed story that better ties into the Yuna and Rikku panty poop tale. The head slid in past her sphincter. There was no evidence of her desperation unlike my predicatment. I've just started reading and I don't even know what work of fiction I'm reading a fanfic of yet already I feel acquainted with the characters.
I leaned up against the wall like Dotty and Betsy and started pissing against the wall. I watched helplessly while Betsy had her orgasm, followed by Dotty. Her whole body tensed and she inhaled deeply. This is like 3 contest themes combined! This continued for a long time. I started pissing and the stream must have hit Betty, because she moaned. It subsided quickly and her aching bladder finally got it's turn.
I felt their tongues lapping me and each other. The area was aptly named. Dotty slow regained her senses and grabbed the watch — it said 4: Soon I felt a few drops of liquid coming through the hole in the wrap. The main source of my criticism is Penelo's dump. There was obvious pain on my face as I drank and ate.